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Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Assessment Essay


       Nothing but Net:
               An Essay on Teaching Gym Classes for Assessment
           Mia Perry
           8th Grade
                   February 27, 2012
                   Pine Point School

        Have you ever thought about what a game of knock out, a badminton match, or even just 20 minutes of playing outside a day can do for your health? I found out the answer to that question during the seven weeks of working on my assessment project, and conducting research about the topic of child physical education. Teaching the physical education classes, better known as P.E. or gym, was a delighting experience filled with basketballs, birdies, and badminton nets. Although this does not sound as if much effort was involved during my assessment, there are many thoughts and much stress that goes into the process and every-day set up for the class.
        Finalizing my service site was not an easy or short process. When I first started my assessment, I was volunteering at High Hopes Therapeutic Riding Center. I chose High Hopes because I had not worked with horses before, and I was also interested in helping children with disabilities. I soon discovered that I was not old enough to conduct side walking activities with the children, so I would be cleaning horse stalls instead, which is when I decided that this site was not going to be the best place to volunteer for this particular project. When I decided that 
High Hopes was not going to work, I consulted Mr. Salsich for advice on finding a new location. After some discussion about options on Pine Point School’s campus, I decided that being the assistant in the P.E classes with younger children would be a good idea. I talked to Mrs. Davis, 

who was glad that I offered to help, and she said that I could work with the 6th and 7th graders during my study hall period. Although I was excited to begin, I was not sure how things would go since I was working with students that were closer to my age. I was expecting students below 3rd grade that were many years younger than I was. I am glad that I was able to work with the classes that I was assigned to, even though they were not as young as I had anticipated. Changing my service site was not easy, but I am satisfied that I stuck with the gym classes.
        Although I was doing my volunteer work at Pine Point, there were still challenges and obstacles that I had to work through with the students. Since I knew most of my students well,

My 6th Grade Students Warming Up
they often wanted to have side conversations with me. Because of this, I was often instructing them to do the warm up exercises again, so that I could focus on taking attendance. Sometimes I would be helping one student and another student would try to ask me a question, and over time the students learned that they needed to wait patiently if I was helping another student. On the other hand, some students thought that since I was not their regular teacher, I would not notice the code of conduct lacking in certain areas. For example, one of my students took his shoes off and started fooling around even though there is a gym rule that states that you always need to keep your shoes on, and one of my other students had sports clothes at hand, but did not put them on until I noticed and told him that he needed to change since he had the clothes that were necessary for the class. I solved these problems by not allowing them to play or participate until they followed the rules. Some of my students were not as accomplished at sports as others, and felt discouraged sometimes when they were having trouble. A few of my 6th grade students had difficulties with shooting the basketball, and I spent a fair amount of time in the last two classes helping students with shooting. One of my students was not confident during P.E, so I gave her suggestions on how to improve. Although there were obstacles in my assessment, I was able to overcome them all.

        Looking back over all of my assessment visits, I was able to be of assistance to more people than I originally thought. One way is that I helped students gain sports skills. Although 
sports are not all that matters in life, I was able to teach some students how to be better basketball athletes. They also learned rules about badminton from me during our badminton season. 
Badminton Racket, Birdie and Nets (Not At PPS)
I was an aid to Mr. DeLapp and Mrs. Davis in multiple aspects of the class. I demonstrated activities for different stations, took attendance, and set-up and took down equipment. They had more time to become more organized since they had time not always having to teach the class. What’s more, I helped myself by gaining knowledge on how to deal with children. I was able to calm students down, and get them to listen when they became hyperactive. If students wouldn’t abide by the rules, there would be a penalty for them until they agreed to follow directions. In the end I assisted many people, and also expanded my knowledge of problem solving.
        Over the course of my assessment research on child physical education, I learned much about the importance of gym in your life as a student. Physical education is an activity that helps your growth, health or body image. The origin of this activity traces back to China in 2500 B.C. In school systems, as you advance up a grade each year, more activities like badminton and field hockey are added. More on the statistics side, a Center for Disease Control test shows that girls who get 70-300 minutes of physical activity a week consistently score higher on tests and quizzes that are given to them in school. Sadly, schools are cutting gym classes, which could be a factor that can affect girl’s academic achievements. The quality of the class also matters, because you could have P.E. class for an hour and just stand around. With classes being cut from our nation’s school curriculums, there is an increase of time in class for students to not be active, which can increase your weight because you are stressed and will not be burning calories from lunch. Weight is the combination of calories that you eat with the amount of those calories that you burn. Children consume calories, and, since there is less physical movement time in their lives, spend little to no time burning the calories, which can risk obesity. Learning about weight and how movement can help you lead a healthier life has given me useful knowledge that I will hopefully be able to apply to my life as I grow older.
        There are also themes and motifs in To Kill a Mockingbird that relate to my assessment work. The first motif that relates to my assessment work was games. We engaged in many activities such as knock out, king of the court, and other games during the classes. In the book, Jem, Dill and Scout play games such as impersonating the Radley family or running to touch Boo Radley’s house. Also, my work relates to the theme of expectations. Students are usually expected to be great athletes or at least good at sports. The expectations that you have for the students in class are similar to the ones that Aunt Alexandra set for Scout. The last theme that relates to my work was do not judge. When some students weren’t as talented at badminton or basketball, or had difficulty with the sport, no one judged them. This reminded me of how Tom Robinson was judged by people just because of his skin color, and how that is not what should matter to people. I was surprised that I could relate the themes that I found in To Kill a Mockingbird could relate to my assessment work.
        There are some changes that I would make if I had to do my assessment project over again. I could have saved time in each class if I did not have to explain the rules multiple times. I would have quieted the children down when they weren’t paying attention. If I had taken the time during demonstrations, they most likely would have listened closer and not had questions. I also would have tried to be more helpful to the students when they had questions. I was often vague when I explained the games so they generated even more questions. Sometimes they would be having difficulties without asking for help, and I should have stepped in to help them even if they didn’t need my help. Lastly, I would have taken more opportunities to encourage the students. When some of the children got out of the game, I sometimes forgot to congratulate them for doing a good job. Some of the children were discouraged when they missed or lost, and I could have made them feel better. Even though I had a successful experience, there were changes that I could have made to my assessment work.
        I have been changed by this assessment project work in three ways. First, I have a slightly better idea of knowing how to deal with issues. I know what to say to calm down children, somewhat like how Atticus deals with Jem and Scout. Next, I know the students better. Before the assessment project started, I didn’t know any of the new 6th grade students. For the children that I still don’t know, I left a good reputation and now they know who I am. Lastly, I gained appreciation for my gym teachers and knowledge about P.E. classes. There are large amounts of effort that must be put into preparing and teaching a class. Now I know how to set-up the nets and stations and take attendance. As I have said, I was changed by the assessment project even though they are small changes.
        I wonder if mockingbirds ever exercise. Maybe the older birds teach them, like I taught the classes for the 6th and 7th graders. Although we are different, birds may have similar lives. I greatly enjoyed helping Mr. D and Mrs. Davis teach the P.E. classes, and I hope that they had the same satisfactory experience as I did.

Essay #9

  Equally Wise Connections:
         An Essay Relating A Quote From To Kill A Mockingbird To My Life and To The Book
Mia Perry
      8th Grade English
       February 10, 2012


Atticus Finch is an extremely wise man. Although he may not exist in real life, Harper Lee created his character to be witty and understanding. Atticus has moral courage and is intelligent with his thoughts and words. He also has some quotes that are able to relate to, and were very important at the time.
(TS) “We know all men aren’t created equal in the sense some people would have us believe- some people are smarter than others, some people have more opportunity because their born with it, some men make more money than others, some ladies make better cakes than others- some people are born gifted beyond the normal scope of most men.” (SD) This quote from chapter 20 of To Kill a Mockingbird was said by Atticus during his final statements to the Jury in Tom Robinson’s trial, but they also relate to the characters in the novel. (CM) Scout and Jem, unknowing and thoroughly thinking through every moment, were born with more opportunity than people such as Boo Radley or Dill have access to, partially because they don’t have supportive parents like Atticus, and probably have parents that are as precautionary as Aunt Alexandra. (CM) Although Calpurnia isn’t as well educated or appreciated in Maycomb County as Aunt Alexandra is, she has better judgment and family skills, and Aunt Alexandra does not seem as if she knows that she is lacking in many areas. 
Atticus Finch Defending Tom Robinson
(CM) In addition, Atticus Finch was born with many gifts that helped him defend Tom Robinson, and Atticus always does what is right in his eyes.
(SD) This quote also relates to my personal life, because there have been many experiences l was able to have and enjoy that others are not so fortunate to undergo. (CM) Some people envy my abilities at different sports that I was gifted with, while I am not so accomplished at others. (CM) Sadly, in my lifetime my eyes have seen many people who are experiencing homelessness, which reminded me of how Mr. Finch explained that some men make more money than others. (CM) Also, I’ve been to many places across the country and in the world that so many people, as Atticus said, are not born with the opportunity to explore. (CS) Atticus made valid points in his speech to his jury, and possibly Scout and Jem will grow up knowing that message, and everyone who reads the book will understand how we are all different yet alike.

As children, you grow up thinking that owls are the wisest animals. They are often portrayed in movies and books as the smart person who speaks up and gives the greatest advice that there is to be given. If that is actually true, then I wonder if the owls think the same way that Atticus Finch thinks. Maybe owls give advice, similar to the advice of Atticus, to their owlets.




Self Assessment
1) One issue that I am continuing to work on is that I sometimes repeat words without being purposeful.
2) One strong point that I see in this piece of writing is my varied lengths of sentences.
3) One possible weak point I see is that the flow of my sentences from one to the next aren’t always equal.

Essay #8

Mild In America:
     An Essay About Mildness In My Life and To Kill A Mockingbird
An Essay By Mia Perry
    January 24, 2012

Mild is my favorite flavor of salsa. Although I eat this type of salsa all the time, I never thought about what the word mild truly means. In fact, mild isn’t just a word used to describe the spiciness of the dip, but is also a word that is not used often in today’s American dialogue.  There are many people in my life that I know of or have heard of that are mild.
(TS) The word mild means gentle or not easily provoked. (SD) One of To Kill A Mockingbird’s characters, Atticus Finch, is an example of a gentle father. (CM) He is always kind to his children and others with his good manners, and he never purposefully wants to offend anyone. (CM) Atticus has good morals and standards that he sets for himself to help maintain his calmness. (SD) In addition, Atticus isn’t just a well mannered father, but he acts the same way in the courtroom as a lawyer. (CM) Atticus isn’t intolerant in court, but instead, hearing and listening, he openly wants to hear what the opposing side has to say. (CM) He could be rude and interrupt every time he disagrees, but he stays aware of how others think. (CS) Atticus Finch is an all around good-natured person, who seems to care about others even if they don’t care about him.
(TS) Aside from book characters, I have also seen and heard of some mild people in my life. (SD) A few years ago, there was a story in the news about a man at his favorite baseball team’s game, and he caught a ball that was hit out of the field. (CM) He handed the ball to his young daughter, who not knowing what to do with it, threw it back and everyone watching gasped in horror. (CM) After she 



Father With Daughter Who Threw Back The Foul Ball
threw the ball away, smiling and laughing, he gave her a huge hug, which is without question a good example of a warm-hearted father who doesn’t care about material items more than his family. (SD) Another peaceable person is my grandma on my mother’s side. (CM) Even though she likes to sleep often, she always wants to help in any way she can by cleaning or cooking. (CM) She loves occasional jokes, and she never raises her voice. (CS) From fictional characters to real life people, there are mild living beings in places you don’t know about or expect.
One animal that I think of when I think of mild creatures are giraffes. Giraffes don’t seem to bother anyone at all, and they care about themselves and their herd. Like Atticus Finch, they are protective and loving towards their children. Everyone seems to have a mild characteristic, but some people are able to show it more than others.